There’s No Tomorrow, Only Today


21 Responses to “There’s No Tomorrow, Only Today”

  1. Jae,

    This was straight fyiah…Loved it !


  2. Oh I love it!

  3. sincere Says:

    wow…this is very nice well written:) originality goes a long way wish u many success and blessings…Sin

  4. Oww i loved it. You did the damn thing.

  5. Jay, Jay, Jay, Jay! I was on the edge of seat the whole time while reading this story! I couldn’t believe some of the stuff that took place and I found myself yelling at the computer screen more than one time! Overall rating 10 stars Jay this story was beyond wonderful! Keep doing you and I hope to read more of your work soon!

  6. All I can say is wooooooowwwwww..This was incredible..Mr. Jay u are a very talented writer as I told u before and I hope u go very far in your career

  7. A. Nychol Says:

    Jay, this novella was awesome! It definitely kept my attention.

    – [ally nycholâ„¢]

  8. Teresa D Patterson Says:


    I just had to stop through and give you kudos! This is explosive and captivating. I’ve been glued to my computer screen for the last hour and a half reading this. I didn’t even want to answer my phone!

  9. Stacysplanut TWNT47 Says:

    Fantastic writing! Very very talented! I loved the novella and look forward to more spicey urban reading! Congrats and fantastic job!

  10. I enjoyed the dialogue, SMART AND TO THE POINT. The protagonist still needs work though, I mean, initially I felt Kanjia would be a life changing force….this is a great start

  11. Summer Denise Says:

    UMMMMMMMMMM, What can I say? It was well worth the wait. I was interested from the beginnging to the end! This was an impressing novella.

  12. Dee Ballard Says:

    Your story took my breath away. What a story, what an author! Now the world will come to know what I’ve always known….you have many gifts and writing a great story is one of them.

  13. I am most definantly feeling it! I look for big things from you!

  14. Now this is what I call power. I haven’t read anything in a while, been writing but man I’m glad I stopped writing The King of Erotica 5 for this brilliant piece right here. I will read it a second time. I really enjoyed this, and you have a strong voice. I hope you never give up on that voice because this is art my brothah.

    From one brothah to another.
    The King of Erotica

  15. This was brilliant and flowed so well! Sexy, mysterious, and real; my kind of read! Thanks for posting…

    Peace & Blessings,


  16. Jaree,

    Excellent read. Couldn’t wait to reach the end where it all came together.

  17. Teaguem2005 Says:

    Ok. I read it through in sections and am going to go back and re-read it all the way through because it was a truly enjoyable piece. Even though I don’t know them personally, I can tell you matter of factly that you have made your English teachers proud. I mean a brother used similes, metaphors and provided details that draws the reader in to the point where I could see the story unfold with your descriptions.

    The ability to do that is key to the difference between a good writer and a great story teller. You show your ability to infuse your writing with personality and street venacular simultaneously. With all the selections available today, writers have to ask what would make a person want to read what I wrote?

    You have the ability to answer that question. I didn’t care how long it took me, I was vested. Almost as if to borrow a movie phrase, “you had me at hello”.

    Great story, great attention to detail. Great twist that I didn’t see coming. I look forward to more of your work. ’09 Baby, Baby!

  18. SoulLifeMagazine Says:

    Wow, you are a truly talented artist, i liked how you painted a picture with your words….a visionary writer is what i like to call it, perfectly chosen metaphors, keep doing ya thing and God Bless, SoulLifeMagazine

  19. Hey this is LaVon. I haven’t heard from you in a while dude. You on my When you get a chance email me so we can stay networking. Okay one love and blessings.

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